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Thứ Tư, 9 tháng 3, 2011

DO TIEN's essay. Everyone checks it out!!!!!!!!! thanks a lot

As the result of the worldwide globalization, there is now a popular trend obviously that rich countries are richer, poor countries are poorer. Some people are  now of the opinion that wealthy countries have to take responsibility to provide such things as foods and education in support of poor countries. However, others think the governments of poorer countries themselves have to look after their citizens. The essay will take a closer look at the issue.

Most people, myself included, are of the opinion that wealthy countries should share their wealthy among poorer countries such as foods, education and so on because of the following three reasons.

 Firstly, citizens of both wealthy countries and poor countries are human beings. Therefore, those who live in poor countries deserve to enjoy their happy lives. The activities of wealthy countries  are that not merely a good deed, but also a duty itself.

 Secondly, as can be seen in some parts of the world, some poor countries in Asia and Africa have the very low standard of living. Visibly, they always have to face famine, diseases and poverty. In contrast, some countries in Europe and American are some of the wealthiest parts of the world . As a result, what this will lead is that the gap of the poor and rich is by far more expansive.

Thirdly, I think sharing the wealth among poorer countries will boost and strengthen the mutual relationships among all countries over the world. in addition, these will help reflect the wealth and strength of rich countries
On the other hand, sharing the wealth among poorer countries has a bad side itself. Unexpectedly, only by receiving the helping abroad will poorer countries rely passively on aid and try not to develop themselves. Another adverse reason, wealthy countries will take advantage of sharing the health to interfere  deeply into the domestic affairs of poorer countries

Summarize, the action of wealthy countries in helping poorer countries by providing like foods and education has both good side and bad side. Thus, we have to consider this issue carefully to avoid the bad side, simultaneously bring into play the good side.

This essay consists of 308 words
The author:  mr.tiendo@gmail.com
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5 nhận xét:

  1. hey everybody!
    it is better than the previous essays, isn't it??? comment please !!!

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  2. well, your writing is better and better! congratulation! however, in my opinion, you should make the first two paragraphs in one. because each essay concludes only one introductory paragraph

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  3. your writting skill is better than previous writting.
    in my opinion you should figure some concrete country out, with their real situation ( the number of poor, persons died of disease..etc

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  4. Thanks for your comment, i will pay atention to your advice...
    Hope that i will find your writing posted on blog soon!!!

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