| This is the topic of this week. Enjoy yourself!!! What Is The Value Of Money? | |
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| | Money we all know is a medium of exchange Buyers and sellers relate to each other through money The question here is – what is the value of money? Few say money is the root of all evil Many say money is the root of prosperity And how valuable is money Almost everything is measured by money People go to work everyday because of money Wealth of individuals is measured by money All purchases and transactions are made by money Every country has a name for its own money The importance of some countries In based on the value of their money What is the value of money? The rise and fall of foreign exchange Is used to measure the value of money Success to many is also measured by money Corporate positions are measured by money There are some people who marry for money What is the value of money? To many, money is everything You cannot get many things done without money Many have pondered and contemplated to ask Can human beings live without money? Then, how shall we determine and decide The prices of individuals and materials Differences between the rich and the poor Are calculated in monetary terms The power bestowed by money Seems bigger than imagined |
1. What do you think about the definition of “ money” and its role?
2. There are some famous idoms about money, your opinion?
· Money is power.
· There is never enough money.
· Everything depends on money.
· I can't accomplish my dreams without money.
· It takes money to make money.
· Money can't make you happy.
· I can't be happy without money.
· It's not spiritual to have money; it's better to give than receive.
3.what have you done to save money?
4.Saving money is necessary but we would like to be generous or not to be considered misers, is it difficult?
5.The difference between “stinginess” (“miserliness”) and “saving”?
We’ll sing the song “ Bad day” by Daniel Power.
hello everyone!!!
Trả lờiXóawhen i have just read this poetry. in my view, i just find it difficult to define what the money is and how valuable the money is. because of the fact that each person has their own point of view...
money can bring you many things: materials,relaxation and so on. in the other hand it is aslo the root of bad things
so i will give a acedemic money-related topic qestion below and write a Ielts-form acedemic writing. hope that everyone checks it to upgrade my essay. thanks a lot....
money-related topic :
what is the value of money. some thing that money can make them happy and relaxed, others think that you could never be happy with money only. what do you think about that opinion
This is the good topic, in fact money always make us affluent and some complex problems can be brought on you because of money.
Trả lờiXóai suggest you all preparing for it perfectly.
have fun!
giagia.
"""this is my first acedemic wrting in my life"""
Trả lờiXóa"""it is said that you can't get any thing without possessing money. some people think that money can make them happy and relaxed, others think that they could never be happy with money only. i agree that opinion completely because of the reasons below
as we all know, in any society money has always been an essential tool affecting the development of every country. money is a medium of exchange it ensures goods exchanged easily. everyone is additive to money because of what it can bring as the power, house, cars and so on. moreover it can make you feel so grand and happy when you have a lot of money more than others.you can't live and buy without money so eveyone always try their best to make money as much as possible
besides, in some aspects you can't get everything as expected with money only. for instance, you can't have the respect,the greatefulness or the love of others when you get a lot of money only. you can't get your girlfriend's heart as you only give her money and not careful about her. to have these,you will have to do some thing with your charitable heart. most important, the way of expressing of yours is honest. you are always helpfull then you can get it.
in clussion, we can't deny the benefits of money bringing to them but we can't look foward to geting everything with money only so we should earn more money exhaustedly and care about everyone as much as possible in order to have a happy life"""
@@@i hope that Quang and Hau will see my writing and leave useful comments to my essay@@@
In my opinion, I think that you should change sth:
Trả lờiXóa-what it can bring as the power, house, cars and so on-> ..such as houses, power..
-make you feel so grand and happy->so satisfactory and..
-you can't get your girlfriend's heart as you only give her money and not careful about her->...you only present her luxury gifts and dont care ab her feeolings
-most important, the way of expressing of yours is honest->the most important thing when expressing your love is your honesty(sincere)
- we should earn more money exhaustedly ???
you mean to "we should try to earn money till exhausted"????
MONEY
Trả lờiXóaIt can buy a House
But not a Home
It can buy a Bed
But not Sleep
It can buy a Clock
But not Time
It can buy you a Book
But not Knowledge
It can buy you a Position
But not Respect
It can buy you Medicine
But not Health
It can buy you Blood
But not Life
we always work hard to have a less hard life
Trả lờiXóathanks...for your suggestions. but im wondering anycomment else??
Trả lờiXóapretend that youre a judge. how well essay is???
i love these sentences
'''It can buy you a Book
But not Knowledge '''
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i want to upload my writings as a host???
Trả lờiXóawhat will i have to do??? show me
i think we should not focus on the content of Tien's essay. An essay are considered by the structures, words and length. As you know, we should use more complex structures, academic words and limited words. we should base on the sample essays.
Trả lờiXóaNative speaker say that" thank you for suggestions, not thank for your suggestions"
however, this is the good job, i am not sure i can do better than you, i will upload my essay--)))
actually i wanna convert our blog into ielts forum
Trả lờiXóaeveryweek there are 7 topics given to everyone and write and check regularly
hi! this is the first time i've read your essay. how shall i say??? i just have some comments for you:
Trả lờiXóayou should write the easay not only with correct structure ,grammar and spelling but also with clear organization.that is the most importance.
-should use more formally writing language instead of spoken language
- using more trasition word or sentence conectors
to make your essay clear
thank Diên
Trả lờiXóai will notify that>>>
hope that u will give me more comments next time!!!
welcome to our oilandgasclub forum!!!
it's a matter of fact,this week, I'm quite busy with my study and business, so I'll post my essay later but I think it's useful to get your comments! Lets grow our blog!>"<
Trả lờiXóasorry for posting the essay late. lets read completely and give me some advices tks.
Trả lờiXóaIts common today that there are many different ideas about whether money always bring happiness. Some people agree that money can bring happiness because you can have anything you like as a big house, a luxury car, a journey to the moon..etc more ever, Money give us fame, inspiration, it keep us moving forward in our life.You also can give your family a comfortable life with long vacations to famous place every year. After all, money can bring everything as can be bought with it.
In my opinion, I think what makes you happy is everything else like your family, your friends, and of course, your significant other. Happiness does not depend on your amount of money only, it depend on your life and the way you live it, and I know that money is very important in our life, but its not everything and you rarely get a happiness life with money only. These some reasons why I think that.
. Money can not buy hearts and real emotion, living with a person that you did not love causing make separation.
. You must face up to educate your child hard when you always concern in money.
. Money also make you haughty when you reach to the power level enough.
First and foremost, money surely can not buy heart and real emotion, everyone falling in love and getting married because of the felling that living with out their lovers is impossible , in fact they would not concern how many money their lover have?
Family is a component of the society, if the family was no love the society could not have happiness. Happiness is simple when you are satisfied with your real emotion and not necessary to worry about your safe.
Equally important, when you probably concern in your money, thus you have no time caring your child or educating them well, it is really hard to grow them to be a good person with out their parents care.
Finally, you can become so haughty if you are in controlling of money, so power and influence are all you care for. You certainly get power when you have a lot of money , then you want to do every things you like having no concern another's felling. There fore everyone will keep away from you and no chances for you to get happiness at all.
It is clearly show that money is very significant in our life but we can not live happily with money only. Everything must be balanced if we want to have a good life in deed.
money!money!money!
Trả lờiXóaIt brings us very much happiness and a lot of sad
.We can lost friendship, good relationships because of money.
DON'T depend on money!
MONEY depend on yourself!
OK OK....
Day by day, money plays more important roles in our life. someone believes they can buy anything by money, even love. Earning a lot of money is the goal of young generaton in modern life. Obviously, the money brings to us a number of advantages.
Trả lờiXóaThe life will better, if you have adequate money for spending, you would solve your problems by yourself, not only you but also your family, your son would attend at best school, your wife could go shopping whenever she wants, your family would be comfortable by modern mean of life. More and more young people usually praies “ money” at the pagoda in the spring. You would get the power if you have much money.
However, money leaves us a number of disadvantages which prevent developing life.
In the modern life, there are less and less people who is good at arts, musical fields. People have been depended on money so much. Money are too much part of our life. The money is the reason of number of suicides.It is really dangerous let money control us.
By anyway, money influenceson your relationship, if your background of a relationship is the fairness of money, it would be easy to break. The money could not buy a trust love, sometimes, the losing balance of rights is the reason of broken relationship among the members of a family.
Money is a tool of life, not a goal, I always try to find out the way to independ on money, that way can keep much thing on your life, working for a better life.
Hieu's writing contains a lot of creative ideas; ther are some academic words needed in ielts essay.
Trả lờiXóaBut the structure of writing does not have a ielts standard rule. the rhetoric of the essay of yours is not enough convincing you had beter follow a ielts sample. anyway, congratulations, good writing for next time>>>
QUANG's repaired essay is better than your previous essay. shall we write better!!! :))
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