It's gonna be great to recieve the essays of all members of our club as soon as possible. well, especially, essays from Mr Hieu, Mr Quang, Ms Hau... others... enjoy this part!
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Write about the following topic:
Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers.
Do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
Write at least 250 words.
good ideas!!! a clear structure but what happened! there were some grammar mistakes in your entire writing.in my opinion, it looks like a writing. actually, it should have been an essay that other from the stuff above you wrote....
Trả lờiXóayep, i did not see some mistakes because i wrote it in a short time. next time i will revise it.
Trả lờiXóaI strongly agree with this statement, computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices everyday. There are some reasons why i said that:
Trả lờiXóaFirstly You can save your time very well. With a modem connected already between your computer at home and office you can easily access its system and do your works in the easy ways, so that you do not need to spend many time on commuting from your house to your office everyday. Furthermore you will have more time to take care your family when staying home. you can play with your children, feed them well and decorate your bed room etc.
secondly, you can protect yourself, because of keeping away from the bad traffic situation. Nowadays joining the traffic makes us more nervous, tired and overwhelming specially in the rush - hours, therefore when you decide to use Computers and modems in your works, you will have no chance to suffer the traffic jam or some obstacles that you can meet on your daily routine thus I really think that it will make your body heath and your mental heath better.
To conclude, i think that today computers and modems technology play an very important role on our life, you can not live comfortably with out them and they can make your job easy, you can do your work not only at your office but wherever, when you have a network connected already.
today, im plz to refresh your essay, Mr Hieu... :D
Trả lờiXóaI absolutely agree with the statement that with the rapid development of technology having a impact in most ereas of life then computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices everyday.
Firstly, You can save your time very well.only with a computer connected to the internet at home, you can easily access to the internet to do work at home instead of working in offices, everything seems more convinient than what it was in the past, you therefore do not need to spend much time on commuting from your house to your office everyday. Furthermore, you will have more time to take care of your family, what this will lead to is that when staying home more you will not miss your meal together. obviously, you can play with your children, feed them better and decorate your bed room etc.
secondly, you can protect yourself,you will not face wtih the traffic jam always making you exhausted. joining the traffic nowadays makes us more nervous, tired and overwhelming. especially in the rush-hours. therefore, when you decide to use Computers and modems in your work, you will have no chance to suffer from the traffic jam or some obstacles that you can meet on your daily routine. thus,I really think that it will make your heath and your mood better.
To conclude, i think that today computers and modems play an very important role in our life, you can not live comfortably without them and they can make your job easily, you can do your work at your home instead of your office only with a computer connected.
next topic, it's gonna be great to recieve your writings
from Mr Hieu
:D. just some changes that come into my mind in a few minutes.
i should have posted my writings but i have got into some troubles these days, therefore, i will send my essay a litle late
hoping that there will be more full essays posted on this page.....
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