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Chủ Nhật, 2 tháng 10, 2011

This essay below is a good essay for us to follow, source by internet... edited by Do Tien

Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
-At the present age, globalization is playing a increasingly important role in our lives. But in the mean time whether it is a blessing or a curse has sparked a heated debate. Some people argue that globalization has a fundamentally  beneficial influence on our lives, while others contend that it has a detrimental effect as well
-A convincing argument can be made about globalization not only playing a pivotal role on the development of technology and economy, but also promoting the cultural exchange between different countries. To start with, it is globalization that impelled many coporations become an international group, thereby making a contribution to the local technology and employment. Specially, when a multinational group establishes a factory in the developing country, the new equipment, the new manager skills and job vacancies are all in the best interest of the local countries. moreover, people worldwide can get to know each other better through globalization
-Addmitedly, globalization has severely affected young generation, today in the countries, it is common to see teenagers wearing the same things. it looks like that only can you distingish them by their language. An unexpected side of globalization is that some of the local campanies in all corners of the world  may go backrupt and cutural assimilation will become an acute problem. 
-In conclusion, i would concede that globalization does come with some adverse effects, despite that fact, benefits created by globalization by far outweigh its disadvantages. overall, i am  conviced that we will further promote globalization in the future and meanwhile, the local countries should try to address the issues related to globalization 

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  1. a clear structure with many academic words, actually i think that we should put academic words as much as possible on academic writing, how ever it is not very easy !^^

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