Undeniably, the mass advertising is the way which the producers use for leading consumers to meet their needs of goods. firstly, the advertisements help us choose to which we will buy and know how good it is. secondly. it helps the producers offer consumers the best goods. for examples, the advertisements help you buy a new cars with some new extra features that help your traveling more comfortable or you can find sports goods that make your life healthier may help to improve your life.
Besides, mass advertising seems to encourage us buy things that we don't really need and they contaminate our minds that we really need those things. perhaps because these advertisements are available anywhere. for instance, when i am watching TV, listening to radio or reading paper i notice that there are many ads about getting a new luxury mobile. in fact i don't need it but ads encourage me to buy in order to succeed or be happy
Today, in general we seem to pay much more attention to luxury and expensive things. especially, for teenagers they want to perform themselves so they are attractive to special new and expensive goods. in this case as the result of the continuous contamination of mass advertising
To sum up, i think that each person has his own scale of values. if you are interested in things you need then you see ads about them. trying to avoid from others
Nowadays, there is a popular trend that manufactures are spending more and more money for advertisement. It is obivious that advertisement is a positive way for connecting cosumers with manufactures. However, although the quality of goods do not rise, the price of goods are increased. I am going to discuss the effects of advertisement.
Trả lờiXóaObiviously, advertisement appears more in our life, it is easy to see an advertising at wherever, on internet, on television…. It brings to our life so much profits.
Firstly, cosumers will be supplied a plenty of products information from manufacture. Reseller can not buy goods higher than so much, imitation have no opportunity for developing, consumers can buy a products even do not come to shop,
In adition, advertisement helps consumer to make the best choice, from a number of information, consumer easily compares among different pruducts, the develop of information technology are supporting for advertisement can be non-missing tool, consumer can buy a product whenever, wherever they want.
However, sometimes, advertisement brings to us more advantages. Funding for advertisment make price higher, even 5- 10 percent. Consumers have to pay much money for a product. Some information advertisement is not real. Advertisment are bring more unexpected things.
To sum up, advertisment is changing our world, our life. However, I really hope that manufacture can supply real informations for consumers, maybe that is dicistive condition for the developing of a company.
!!!!Quang's essay with a good idea but a lot of mistakes in spelling and grammar.
Trả lờiXóayou should thinking of the questions carefully before each writing
i will check your writing later!!!!
i want to emphasize that we are writing an academic essay. we have to use at least 5 academic words in writing to get a higher mark band
hi! Tien!
Trả lờiXóafrom my point of view, your writing has a good organization;however, your thesis statement is too genaral. you should write it clearly in order to make the readers understand what you want to talk about.
some notices:
- should not use this phrase"let us look over this opinion".it be long to spoken language.
- instead of using "so",you can use other sentence connectors such as therefore, thus, consequently,etc.("so "usually use in speaking)
try again and you will write better.
" the more mistakes you make, the better results you get" COME ON!
thank hirota9x!!!
Trả lờiXóai find your suggestions actually helpful. i will apply it to my later essays
i hope that you will get together to write and get more comments to writings
thanks a lot!!!
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these are some of my suggestions to Quang's witing
Trả lờiXóaNowadays, there is a popular trend that manufacturers are spending more and more money on advertisements. It is obivious that advertising is a effective way for connecting cosumers with manufactures. However, although the quality of goods does not rise, the price of goods is increasing day by day. I am going to discuss the effects of advertisements.
Obiviously, more and more advertisements appear in our life, it is easy to see an advertisement somewhere, on internet, on television…. It brings to our life so much profit.
Firstly, cosumers will be supplied a plenty of products information from manufacturers. Reseller can not buy goods with higher price, imitators have no opportunity for developing, consumers can buy a product even do not come to shop,
In adition, advertisements help consumers make the best choice, from an amount of information, consumer easily compares among different pruducts, the development of information technology is supporting for advertisements can be a helpful tool, consumers can buy a product whenever, wherever they want.
However, sometimes, advertisements bring to us more disadvantages. Fund for advertisment make price higher, even 5 to 10 percent. Consumers have to pay much money for a product. Some information advertisements is not real. Advertisments are bringing more unexpected things.
To sum up, the mass advertising is changing our world and life. However, I really hope that manufacturers can supply real information to consumers, maybe that is bood condition for the development of a company.
thanks you! hoping to recieve comments for mext time!
Trả lờiXóahi! everyone! i'm Dien and my nickname is !nucuoicuabien_nd2005". nice to meet everybody. i'm very busy now, so i don't have enough time to write an complete essay. i just only comment to you. if you have any question about writing, i'm willing to help you. contact me if you want.
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